Matt Bellamy

Hey! This is pretty descriptive, you used both description and emotion pretty well with this piece. However you say cracked lips a couple of times and I think you only ...

Hello! A light-hearted and fun poem, here. I'm unsure of the rhyming of need and fee though, and I have visions of a student doing their homework and scrubbing their ...

Hey! I like the simplicity of this poem. One thing I noticed was that it is all in past tense and then you say: "Your eyes are pools of light, ...

I thought this was pretty creative, and I enjoyed it, being the computer geek that I am! Though I'm not sure that using so much computery metaphor stuff makes the ...

At first I thought this was going to be about dancing. How wrong was I! I think that the repetition of boogie man made the poem sound very sinister. One ...

Hey! I thought this was pretty cute, especially the little boulder having its belly tickled by worms. The only thing that I didn't like it was all the dots... Because ...

Hey! I think this was indeed a bit short and you could make it better by fleshing it out a bit. I think the main thing is that you don't ...

Aww! Your poem made me feel sorry for the peacock, so I suppose you have set out what you intended to do, well done! I like your writing style and ...

This is awesome. Seriously. I love your writing style and your description is beautiful. You opened with some great imagery and developed your characters well considering how short the piece ...

Hey! I like this. :) I have a couple of nitpicks though. I think you could use a better word than "scary", when you say the world's a scary place. ...

I know you wanted this to be picked apart but I honestly can't find anything to complain about. I really like what I assume is the chorus, with the Northern ...

I really liked this poem. Yeah, it was long, but if it hadn't held my attention I wouldn't have read it all, let alone reviewed it! So well done for ...

I like how simple this poem is, and I don't think you have to be religious to appreciate the idea behind it. I think it's very inspirational, and I'd go ...

I'd agree that you need to work on your grammar; the grammar check on Microsoft Word is probably helpful to check through your work if you have it. Apart from ...

Hey! I'm going to start by saying I really like this line: "in my glossy eyes", because it makes the narrator sound like he is a bit staring, sort of ...